My Draft of my opening title sequence (with feedback)

My Draft OTS
The overall feedback was very positive with comments such as; "very professional", "very well edited" and lots of other positive comments which were made when showing the year 13 media studies class. However where theres positives there are normally negatives. Negatives including; some didn't like the positioning of the titles as they were very scattered, also some did not realise the film name. Other than that, it was a very successful showing. Now I know what I have to do in order to achieve my goal of producing a great OTS! The only downside is that I was not able to retrieve any photos from my phone which is a big disappointment.